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I don't think I'll find peace
Until you're here with me
When my body can physically feel
What the Universe has made to be

Every time I hear your voice
I get a shiver up my spine
I giggle like a schoolgirl
Living out adolescence in its prime

I don't think I'll love another
Quite as much as I love you
Sheerly because we're best friends
And are alike in so much that we do

I hug my pillow at night
Wishing it were you instead
Crying the driest tears
That leave no stains upon my bed

I wish I were with you every day
That I may express my love for you
In a slightly differing sense
Than that which you are used to
Written 11/5/12 10:27pm
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Gonzalez012997 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this piece a lot. It makes me think of my relationship with my best friend and how want to love him and b the one b his side. The hardest part, I believe, is finding the courage to take that first step even though you know he feels the same. So don't worry I believe that it will all work out or you!
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Junkie4Janet Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Thanks so much!
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Tara-the-Brave Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good . I like you're writing style a lot.
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Junkie4Janet Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Thank you! :)
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Tara-the-Brave Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome. =)
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izrael92 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012   General Artist
why do i have the feeling i know who this is about?
i like it anyway, i'm just curious:shrug:
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Junkie4Janet Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Errr...I don't know, why DO you have the feeling you know who it's about? :?
I'm glad you like it though :meow:
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dragondreamzero Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
that's awesome
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Junkie4Janet Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Gracias :)
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dragondreamzero Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
super welcome keep it up hope your week is going good
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